The Gold Retrievers (Manuscript)
This is an adventure story revolving around two teens who attempt to find a treasure of gold in order to save their town.
We are pleased to award the Dove Family-Approved Seal to the manuscript “Treasure of the West.” This is a well written adventurous story about two teenagers trying to find a treasure of gold to save the town. Some of the characters could use some more information about them or some depth. But all in all the story kept me captivated and would make a delightful movie for the entire family.
I found nothing in this manuscript as it is written, that would be offensive. While this manuscript has been awarded the Dove “Family-Approved” Seal, it is possible the film would not receive the seal depending on any changes of content that may be added.